I rewrote the dialogue in this conversation a lot, trying to get it just right... I don't know if I hit the perfect mark, but I'm happy with it, so that's something.

Just so you know, at the end of the year I plan to be supporting myself entirely via Monster Pulse! If you haven't checked out my Patreon yet, it might be worth your while... It's basically the best and most direct way to support the comic, for as little as one or two dollars a month. If you've been enjoying the comic, I'd really appreciate if you'd consider becoming a patron... Thanks <3